A Day At The Beach


Here is your reward
For being obedient
A day at the beach

2 responses to “A Day At The Beach”

  1. Jonathan, excellent alliteration with “be-ing,” “o-be-dient,” and “be-ach”! It makes for an interesting juxtaposition inside the theme; that is, a scathing, sarcastic remark on people trashing their world with senseless garbage against the spiritual call to BE. I hope that makes sense!

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    1. Hi Sharine. Yes, absolutely it does!

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