Jonathan, excellent alliteration with “be-ing,” “o-be-dient,” and “be-ach”! It makes for an interesting juxtaposition inside the theme; that is, a scathing, sarcastic remark on people trashing their world with senseless garbage against the spiritual call to BE. I hope that makes sense!
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Jonathan, excellent alliteration with “be-ing,” “o-be-dient,” and “be-ach”! It makes for an interesting juxtaposition inside the theme; that is, a scathing, sarcastic remark on people trashing their world with senseless garbage against the spiritual call to BE. I hope that makes sense!
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Hi Sharine. Yes, absolutely it does!
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